閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文

A passenger told an air hostess that he needed a cup of water to take his medicine when the plane just took off．She told him that she would bring him the water within ten minutes．

       Thirty minutes passed．But the air hostess was so busy in the aircraft cabin(客艙) that she forgot to bring him the water! As a result，the passenger couldn’t take his medicine．When the air hostess hurried to him with a cup of water, he was angry and refused her offer.

In the following hours on the flight，each time the air hostess passed by the passenger she would ask him with a smile whether he needed help or not．But the passenger never paid attention to her．

When the passenger was going to get off the plane，he said to the air hostess with a smile，“On the flight，you offer service to me for twelve times in a11．Although l didn’t accept them, how can I refuse your twelve sincere(真誠的)smiles?”

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1．概括短文的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的詞數(shù)大約30左右；

2．以“真誠的回報”為主題發(fā)表自己的看法，至少包含以下的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的詞數(shù)大約

120左右：

(1)如果你是那位旅客，你是否也會被這位空姐的做法感動?為什么?

(2)你是否也有遇到過類似的情況，描述一下當(dāng)時的情形；

(3)你覺得真誠能夠使我們得到回報嗎?

[寫作要求]

    你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。

 

【答案】

 

One possible version：

A passenger on a flight become very angry because the air hostess forgot to bring him a cup of water .But finally he was moved by her sincere smiles and service .

Although the air hostess made a mistake because of her busy work , she tried to make up and offered the service sincerely .Therefore , if I were the passenger , I would be moved by the air hostess as well .

I used to meet a waiter like the air hostess .Because of his carelessness , he spilled the soup on a customer .Of course the customer became angry .The waiter realized his fault , apologized to the customer sincerely and finally got the customer’s pardon .

As to me , I believe that we can get pardon or even repay if we treat others sincerely .When others feel that we are sincere enough , they are more willing to forgive or help us .

【解析】

試題分析：在寫概要部分，除了明確文章主題外，還應(yīng)抓住六個要素：when, where, who, what, why, how。在這六個要素中，所占內(nèi)容比重最大的是what，但是不要寫的過于詳細(xì)。一般來說，記敘文的故事概要可以用這樣的模板來表示：Who did what by…because… 分析本段材料可知這段文章的要素是Where—on the plane; who- a passenger , an air hostess; what –a cup of water ; why –forget ; result – forgive,然后列出要點之后，再用自己的話將要點組織起來。在陳述觀點或發(fā)表看法時往往開門見山地提出觀點和立場，常用的句型有Personally, I think that …；Frankly speaking, I think that…From my point of view …；In my opinion, I’d say that…等。

【亮點說明】本文在結(jié)構(gòu)上符合讀寫任務(wù)的布局要求，首先概述了發(fā)生的事情，然后發(fā)表自己對這件事的看法，再描述了自己的一次經(jīng)歷，最后闡明主題。在發(fā)表自己觀點時用了一個讓步狀語從句Although the air hostess made a mistake because of her busy work和一個條件狀語從句if I were the passenger來表明自己的態(tài)度，這種復(fù)合句的使用不僅顯示了較強(qiáng)的邏輯性，也顯示了作者對句型句式的準(zhǔn)確把握。在描述自己經(jīng)歷以及提出建議時所使用的簡單句使文章長短句結(jié)合，句式更富于變化，更為靈動。

考點：考查提綱作文。

 

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