Question

4．你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．簡(jiǎn)要描述該圖的內(nèi)容；
2．概述你對(duì)該圖中言行不一的現(xiàn)象的理解；
3．舉例說(shuō)明該圖對(duì)你的啟示．
注意：
1．可參照?qǐng)D畫(huà)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．作文詞數(shù)150左右；
3．作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文．寫(xiě)作時(shí)可按"三段式"來(lái)寫(xiě)，首先描述圖片點(diǎn)明主題，然后分析概述對(duì)圖片所反映的現(xiàn)象的理解，最后發(fā)表感想．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：be used to do（被用來(lái)做某事），call on sb to do（號(hào)召某人做某事），take action（采取行動(dòng)），huge amounts of（很多），suffer sth（遭受…..），convey sth （傳達(dá)某事），claim to do（聲稱做某事），A contradict B（A與B相矛盾），fail to（沒(méi)能做某事），require sb to do sth（要求某人做某事），observe traffic rules（遵守交通規(guī)則），tend to（傾向于做某事），violate sth（違反某事），get trapped in（陷入…），in one's opinion（某人認(rèn)為），achieve our goals（實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)）．
【高分句型一】
1．As is vividly shown in the picture，a trumpet carrying a slogan"PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT"is used to call on people to take action immediately．
    此處是由關(guān)系代詞"as"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，"as"在從句中作主語(yǔ)，意為"正如"，主句為"a trumpet carrying a slogan"PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT"is used to call on people to take action immediately．"
【高分句型二】
2．But meanwhile it is giving off huge amounts of waste gases，which makes the trees along the road suffer a lot．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)，主句為"But meanwhile it is giving off huge amounts of waste gases"．
【高分句型三】
3．②What the picture conveys to us is ③that some people claim to protect the environment，①but actually they are polluting it．
①此處是由連詞"but"連接的兩個(gè)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的句子．
②此處是由疑問(wèn)代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，"what"在主語(yǔ)從句中作動(dòng)詞"convey"的賓語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為"is"．
③此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型四】
4．It's obvious that their deeds contradict their words．
此處是由形式主語(yǔ)"it"引導(dǎo)的主句從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+that+句子"．
【高分句型五】
5．①When we require others to observe traffic rules，we ourselves tend to violate them，②in which case we can hardly see a fast-flowing traffic and will frequently get trapped in the traffic．
①此處是由疑問(wèn)副詞"when"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"we ourselves tend to violate them"．
②此處是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 As is vividly shown in the picture，a trumpet carrying a slogan"PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT"is used to call on people to take action immediately．【高分句型一】But meanwhile it is giving off huge amounts of waste gases，which makes the trees along the road suffer a lot．【高分句型二】（描述圖片）
What the picture conveys to us is that some people claim to protect the environment，but actually they are polluting it．【高分句型三】It's obvious that their deeds contradict their words．【高分句型四】Whether conscious or unconscious，these people will surely fail to see a good environment．Unfortunately，the phenomenon is not alone in our society．For example，when we require others to observe traffic rules，we ourselves tend to violate them，in which case we can hardly see a fast-flowing traffic and will frequently get trapped in the traffic．【高分句型五】（對(duì)該圖中言行不一的現(xiàn)象的理解）
In my opinion，we should match deeds with words．Only in this way can we achieve our goals．（啟示）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．