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增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Today, Tony and I went to the countryside by the bus for the Strawberry-picking Festival. It starts at 8:00 in the morning. After the organizer introduced the rules of the festival, we led into the strawberry garden by some girls. While walking along the road, we saw beautiful flowers and heard birds sang. The air was much clean than that in the city when we live. During the festival, we enjoyed sweet strawberries or watched some exciting performances. At about 5:00pm, we had to say goodbye for the garden. Tony and I enjoyed us and hoped to visit there again. How an unforgettable experience!


【小題1】by the bus中去掉the
【小題2】starts改成started
【小題3】we led之間加were
【小題4】sang改成singing
【小題5】clean改成cleaner 
【小題6】when改成where
【小題7】or改成and
【小題8】for 改成to 
【小題9】us改成ourselves
【小題10】How改成What

解析【小題1】“乘公共汽車”用“by bus”，bus前面不加冠詞。   
【小題2】整篇文章用過去時(shí)所以starts改為started。
【小題3】“我們被領(lǐng)進(jìn)草莓園”用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，所以是we were led---。
【小題4】“聽到鳥兒唱歌”用hear birds singing�，F(xiàn)在分詞表動(dòng)作在進(jìn)行。
【小題5】后面有than表示比較，所以前面用比較級(jí)cleaner，而且用much修飾。
【小題6】 先行詞是the city，在定語從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語，所以關(guān)系詞用where，不用when。
【小題7】“吃草莓”和“看表演”之間是并列關(guān)系不是選擇關(guān)系，所以用and不用or。
【小題8】“跟某人說再見”用“say goodbye to sb”，所以介詞for改為to。
【小題9】“玩得開心”用enjoy oneself，所以把us改成ourselves。
【小題10】感嘆句的中心詞是experience，用what來引導(dǎo)感嘆句。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)

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