Question

假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Grandpa,

How are you those days? I have been missing you very much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant view there. You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 those—these

 after--since

 happily—happy

 was child--was a child

 fall—fell

 name--names

 innteresting—interested

 enter into the college--去掉into

 arere going to do--is going to do

 use--used

【解析】

 指這些日子，你怎么樣？而不是那些日子。

 根據(jù)上下文時態(tài)及句子的意思：自從我一年前上大學(xué)，我一直在思念你。

 feel后面接形容詞而不是副詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。

 child是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式，這里指當(dāng)我是一個孩子的時候。

 本文是過去時，所以這里使用fall的過去式fell.

 根據(jù)下文的different plants and their characteristics說明這里使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

 對人作主語進(jìn)行修飾，使用interested.

 enter是及物動詞，后面直接接賓語，不需要接介詞。

 本句的主語是my friend Ann與together with me,沒有關(guān)系，謂語動詞使用單數(shù)形式。

 本句為被動語態(tài)。