Question

你的朋友杰克寫信給你敘述了以下內(nèi)容：1.他發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生很自私，不在乎友誼。2.他覺(jué)得父母與老師不理解他。3.他發(fā)現(xiàn)生活沒(méi)有樂(lè)趣�？吹剿�的信你很著急，作為好朋友請(qǐng)以湯姆的身份給他寫一封回信解決他的煩惱，以下三點(diǎn)為主要內(nèi)容：1.不是所有人都自私，要學(xué)會(huì)溝通；2.學(xué)會(huì)與父母真誠(chéng)溝通；3.把注意力多集中在學(xué)習(xí)上

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.可以適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫

3.開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好

Dear Jack,

Here I am writing to you to reply to your letter.

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                          

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                          

                                                                         

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jack

Here I am writing to you to reply to your letter. From your letter, I know maybe you are not getting along well with your new classmates.Perhaps several of them are selfish.But I am sure ,most of them should be friendly.just try to communicate with them.Then it comes to your misunderstanding between you and your parents and your teacher. I think it is you who are to blame. You must have been told that both our parents and our teachers are kind to us .so talk with them sincerely to solve the problem.Please pay more attention to your study,and you will find happiness in the knowledge. And remember: you are always my best friend.I hope you can be surrounded by happiness every moment.

Yours Tom

【解析】

試題分析：

本文是一篇提綱式書信體作文。作文除了開頭句的內(nèi)容外，針對(duì)杰克寫信敘述內(nèi)容提到的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐一予       以回復(fù)。文章要點(diǎn)提示較多，可以直接依據(jù)提供的要點(diǎn)，按照寫作的幾個(gè)步驟（審題——注要點(diǎn)——圈短語(yǔ)——連成句，篇——查病錯(cuò)），將文章翻譯出來(lái)即可。注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯及高級(jí)句型積累。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】A.多變的高級(jí)句式如強(qiáng)調(diào)的運(yùn)用 it is you who are to blame及祈使句+and+陳述句的靈活運(yùn)用 pay more attention to your study,and you will find happiness 還有 it comes to....(當(dāng)談到…)及情態(tài)動(dòng)詞被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用must have been told B.短語(yǔ)的靈活運(yùn)用,如get along well with與…相處融洽，communicate with與…交流，be surrounded by被…圍繞著。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。