Question

My cousin Li Ming is a senior three student, who devoted himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class. In the evening, he continued to study at home until deeply into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, he was about to do his lessons while his father came up and advised him to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Li Ming enjoyed himself competing and chatting with his father and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic and active in class. He spent a whole day in the country, and Li Ming said what he had done was worth.

Answer 1

【小題1】devoted改為devotes,
【小題2】class改為classes, 
【小題3】deeply改為deep,
【小題4】.too改為so,
【小題5】 In改為On, 
【小題6】while改為when,
【小題7】.came up改為came up with, 
【小題8】relaxing改為relaxed, 
【小題9】and改為but,
【小題10】worth后加it或改為worthwhile

解析試題分析：本題考查較為細(xì)致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識較多。平時應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。
【小題1】devoted改為devotes,  本文的基本時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，故使用devotes.
【小題2】class改為classes, 前面有形容詞several修飾，后面使用可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題3】deeply改為deep,  deep指具體意義的深入；deeply指抽象意義上的深入。本句中的deep into night指到深夜。
【小題4】too改為so, 固定句式so…that…如此…以至于….；too不能用于這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)。
【小題5】 In改為On, 具體到某一天的早晨使用介詞on。
【小題6】while改為when, 固定句式be about to do sth when….正要做某事，在這時…。這里的when是一個并列連詞，表示“在這時…”
【小題7】.came up改為came up with, 動詞短語come up with想出，提出；指他們想出了一個好主意。
【小題8】relaxing改為relaxed, 本句的主語是人，故使用過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞relaxed來修飾人。
【小題9】and改為but,   他在鄉(xiāng)下度過了一天，但是他認(rèn)為這是值得的。上下文之間存在著轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故使用but。
【小題10】worth后加it或改為worthwhile  be worth后面可以接賓語。指這樣做是值得的。也可以單獨(dú)使用worthwhile，做表語。
考點(diǎn)：考察短文改錯