Question

5．某英文報(bào)社組織題為"我喜歡的英語諺語"征文活動，你有意參加．請從下面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語作文，內(nèi)容須包括：（1）該諺語的含義；（2）體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷．
①A friend in need is a friend indeed．
②Where there's a will，there's a way．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)：120-150；
（2）文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
參考詞匯：諺語 proverb．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇開放式作文．從"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"和"Where there's a will，there's a way．"這兩個(gè)諺語中選擇一個(gè)作為話題說明自己的觀點(diǎn)．提示的兩句諺語都是熟悉的，第一句"患難見真情．"第二句"有志者事竟成"．容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．諺語含義；2．個(gè)人經(jīng)歷；3．總結(jié)．
重要短語：stick to…（堅(jiān)持做某事），be determined to do（下定決心做某事），allow sb to do sth （允許某人做某事），prevent sb from doing （阻止某人做某事），achieve one's ambitions（實(shí)現(xiàn)抱負(fù)），fail to do sth（沒能做某事），pass the exam（通過考試），give up（放棄），be frustrated （沮喪），make up one's mind to do （下定決心做某事），take the exam（參加考試），encourage sb to to do （鼓勵某人做某事），forge ahead（銳意前行），bear sth in mind （記住某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．There is an old saying"Where there's a will，there's a way"，which tell us to stick to our goal．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"There is an old saying"Where there's a will，there's a way""，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．However difficult it might be，you will find a way of doing it at last．
此處是由"however+形容詞+主語+謂語"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，可以理解為"No matter how difficult it might be"，主句為"you will find a way of doing it at last"．
【高分句型三】
3．I failed to pass the exam to go to my ideal high school for further study，which made me very frustrated．
此處是關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 There is an old saying"Where there's a will，there's a way"，which tell us to stick to our goal．【高分句型一】If you are really determined to do something，however difficult it might be，you will find a way of doing it at last．【高分句型二】
The point is that you must have the will if you are to succeed．（諺語含義）
      If one wants to succeed，he should not allow obstacles or failures to prevent him from acting．He should learn to make his will stronger and to determine himself to achieve his ambitions．For example，When I was a 9 grader，I failed to pass the exam to go to my ideal high school for further study，which made me very frustrated．【高分句型三】At that time，I almost gave up．Thinking of my dream that I would become a teacher in the future，I made up my mind to take the exam again next year，I made it eventually．（個(gè)人經(jīng)歷）
  Such an unforgettable experience encourages me so much to forge ahead all the way that I achieve more and more in my life because I bear it in mind that where there is a will，there is a way．（根據(jù)諺語寫出總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．