Question

14．自央視推出了家風(fēng)系列訪談，全社會(huì)掀起了談?wù)摷绎L(fēng)、反思家風(fēng)的熱潮．你的筆友Peter收看后寫(xiě)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)：你的家風(fēng)是什么？假如你是李華，給Peter回信，根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞，從中選取適合你的角度，并結(jié)合個(gè)人經(jīng)歷，曬出你的家風(fēng)．
注意：
1． 詞數(shù)：120左右，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；  
2． 開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3． 不得透露個(gè)人相關(guān)信息．

Dear Peter，
    I am very glad to receive your letter，in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses．  _____________________________________             
    What about your ideas about it？Looking forward to your letter．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"圖表+提綱類(lèi)"形式，根據(jù)文章所給圖表和提示信息給筆友Peter寫(xiě)一封信，曬出自己的家風(fēng)，既是提綱作文又是圖表類(lèi)作文．
時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)用第一和第三人稱(chēng)．
重要短語(yǔ)：ask sb about sth （詢(xún)問(wèn)某人關(guān)于某事），refer to…．（提及），family tradition （家風(fēng)），introduce sth to sb （把某事介紹給某人），appreciate sth（欣賞某事），prepares sb sth （給某人準(zhǔn)備某物），under the influence of （在…..的影響之下），do well in（在…..方面做的好），because of（因?yàn)椋�，gives up（放棄），help sb with sth（幫助某人某事），quit sth（放棄某事），serve as（充當(dāng)，用作），be rooted in（植根于），in the form of（以…．形式）．
【高分句型一】
1．I am very glad to receive your letter，in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses．
此處是"in which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"I am very glad to receive your letter"，先行詞為前面主句中的"letter"．
【高分句型二】
1．After dinner，she often gives up entertainment，helping our family with housework．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)"helping our family with housework"作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為"she often gives up entertainment"，主句的主語(yǔ)"she"與所給動(dòng)詞"help"存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
【高分句型三】
2．It's my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds that make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly，never quitting until removing it．
此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的主語(yǔ)"my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds"，如果去掉強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的骨架"It was/is …that"，句意通順，句子為"my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly，never quitting until removing it"．

解答 Dear Peter，
I am very glad to receive your letter，in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses．【高分句型一】Different families hold different focuses of family tradition，such as unity，love and care，honesty，diligence，respect and responsibility．（開(kāi)頭-提出不同的家庭有不同的家風(fēng)） 
Now，I'd like to introduce ours to you-hard-working，which my family would appreciate permanently．【高分句型一】In the morning，my grandma usually gets up early，prepares us a good breakfast，and then begins to do other jobs．She works slowly，but always makes everything clean．Under the influence of my grandmother，my mother also does quite well both in her work and at home．Because of this attitude，every year she was titled"outstanding communist．"After dinner，she often gives up entertainment，helping our family with housework．【高分句型二】It's my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds that make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly，never quitting until removing it．【高分句型三】I serve as a good help to my teachers and classmates as well as my family．Hardworking has deeply rooted in my heart in the form of invisible power．（說(shuō)明自家的家風(fēng)） 
 Family education is an important part of Chinese traditional culture and education． It can be a life of truth； also the principle of doing things． Good family tradition pushes one generation after another to ensure children's healthy growth，whose positive energy promotes social progress of civilization．【高分句型四】（說(shuō)明自家的家風(fēng)） 
What about your ideas about it？Looking forward to your letter．（期待回復(fù)） 
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．