Question

11．假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I'mvery glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before．I have been thinking about the question you ask me．On my opinion，you should come back after finished your studies abroad．For one reason，that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country．It will be quite easily for you to find a good job．In fact，I know a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you．For another reason，I think it will be too much more convenient for me to look after your parents as they are getting old．But this is only my point．It is up to you make a right choice．

Answer 1

分析 很高興收到你兩周前的來信．我一直在考慮你問的問題，在我看來，你在國(guó)外深造后應(yīng)該回來．一方面，你學(xué)習(xí)的東西正是我們國(guó)家急需的，你很容易找到一份好工作．實(shí)際上，我知道有好幾家大公司想雇傭你這樣的人．另一方面，我認(rèn)為你的父母老了，回來后照顧他們也方便些．這只是我的觀點(diǎn)，你會(huì)作出正確的選擇．

解答 I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before．
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I have been thinking about the question you askme．On my opinion，
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you should come back after finished your studies abroad．For one reason，
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that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country．
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It will be quite easily for you to find a good job．In fact，
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I know a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you．
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For another reason，I think it will be too much more convenient
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for meto look after your parents as they are getting old．
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But this is only my point．It is up to you∧make a right choice．
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1．before改為ago．句意表達(dá)的是過去，before是完成時(shí)態(tài)的時(shí)間狀語．
2．a(chǎn)sk改為asked．句意表達(dá)的是過去的動(dòng)作，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
3．On改為In．短語搭配，in my opinion在我看來．
4．finished改為finishing．句中finish位于介詞after后，要用動(dòng)名詞．
5．that改為what．句中what you are studying是一個(gè)主語從句，從句中study缺少賓語，要用連接代詞what．
6．easily改為easy．句中easy是作系動(dòng)詞的賓語，要用形容詞形式．
7．company改為companies．句中有a few修飾，表示幾家大公司，名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)．
8．too去掉．much修飾比較級(jí)表示程度，too多余．
9．me改為you．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句意指代的是說話對(duì)方．
10．加to． 句型搭配，it is up to you to do sth由你決定做某事，it是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．