Question

9．近期，山西某校組織高二學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場討論．主題是：高三年要不要集中進(jìn)行晚自習(xí)．根據(jù)下圖提供的信息，寫一篇120字左右的英語短文，客觀地介紹一下討論的情況，注意要涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)．

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Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3students in our school．The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not．Here is the result according to the survey．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是"圖表+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章圖表和所給提示信息寫一篇短文，闡述山西某校高二學(xué)生進(jìn)行的有關(guān)"高三年要不要集中進(jìn)行晚自習(xí)"的討論．既是圖表作文又是提綱類作文．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．引出話題；2.60%的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)；3.25%的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn) 4.15%的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：a heated discussion（熱烈討論），be willing to do（愿意做某事），according to（根據(jù)），do well in（在…方面做得好），with the help of sb（在某人的幫助之下），concentrate on （集中于），with company of sb （在某人的陪伴之下），prefer to do （更喜歡做某事），get disturbed by （被…干擾），on one's way home（在某人回家的路上），at the same time （同時），an answer to the question（問題的答案），promise sb sth（許諾某人某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not．
此處是由連接詞"whether…or not"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
2．There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語，先行詞為"the students"．
【高分句型三】
3．They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if asked to．
此處是"if條件狀語從句中的省略"，可以理解為"If they are asked to（go to school）"

解答 Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school．The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not．【高分句型一】Here is the result according to the survey．（引出話題）
        60 percent of the students think it's a good idea to have the evening self-study at school．They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers．Also，they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates．（60%的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)）
        There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home．【高分句型二】They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone．（25%的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)）
At the same time，still 15 percent of the students don't have a clear answer to the question．They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if asked to．【高分句型三】But they promise they can also do well at home．（15%的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 圖表作文要求將圖表所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象．首先要對圖表的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖表的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．