Question

II. 書面表達(dá)（30分）
假如你是高中三年級的學(xué)生張明，在學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)“有煩惱向誰說”的調(diào)查活動(dòng)。請用英語給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查結(jié)果（如圖所示）、持相應(yīng)想法的理由及你對調(diào)查結(jié)果的看法。
向同學(xué)、朋友說（理由：同齡人，容易交流和理解）
向老師、家長說（理由：閱歷豐富，有生活和教育經(jīng)驗(yàn)）
不向別人說（理由：不愿和別人說自己的事或難以與別人相處）
注意：1．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。2．詞數(shù)100詞左右。
Dear Editor,
I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey – “To whom do you go when in trouble?” The results are as follows.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Ming

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Editor,
I am a Senior Three student．Recently we have carried out a survey — “To whom do you go when in trouble?” The results are as follows．
Dear Editor,
I am a Senior Three student．Recently we have carried out a survey—“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The main findings are as follows．
61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble and want to confide, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other．Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to．They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences．Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all．They say that their troubles are none of others’ business．Others find it hard to converse with others．
(It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a small example．However, some general comments can be made．) It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives．  Yours sincerely,
Zhang Ming

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