Question

假如你是李平，今年暑假去打工, 參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文“An Unforgettable Experience”，以發(fā)表在校刊上。

工作地點(diǎn)	一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店
工作時(shí)間	四個(gè)星期，每天8小時(shí)
工作情況	當(dāng)保潔員（cleaner）,工作辛苦且枯燥, 每天要起早貪黑地工作，差點(diǎn)中途放棄
你的體會(huì)	遇到了一些沒(méi)預(yù)料到的困難，認(rèn)識(shí)到了勞動(dòng)（labor）的意義……

注意：1. 必須使用第一人稱(chēng);

2. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，總詞數(shù)120左右;

3. 要求字跡工整，卷面整潔。

An Unforgettable Experience

                                                                

                                                                

                                                                

                                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

An Unforgettable Experience

During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for four weeks.

The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.

Although I met with a lot of difficulty in the work, it helped me understand better what labor means. I think it is really a successful experience.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

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