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18．假定你是李華，這周末你參加了一個志愿者活動．請根據(jù)下列提示寫一封郵件與你的美國朋友Jack分享你的這次經(jīng)歷；
（1）活動內(nèi)容；
（2）你的收獲．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack：
I'm writing to share with you my experience at the weekend．（點明書信目的）I took part in a volunteer activity．My duty was to clean a busy street which is about four hundred meters long．After I got up at seven o'clock，sleepy，I went out without a second thought．Cleaning the street seems easy，but sometimes it is very dangerous as you have to be careful of passing cars and bikes．I threw myself onto the bed as soon as I got back home in the afternoon．（記敘活動過程）It was not until then that I realized how great street cleaners are．So I hope everyone should keep our surroudings clean so as to reduce cleaners abandon．All drivers must have an eye on cleaners cleaning the street especially at dawn．（（自己的收獲）
What about your weekend？Please tell me in your next email．
Regards，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇記敘一個志愿者活動的作文．就題目要求可知用第一人稱，用一般過去時態(tài)寫活動．內(nèi)容包括：一記敘活動內(nèi)容；二記敘活動過程；三自己的收獲．
高分句型：
1．My duty was to clean a busy street which is about four hundred meters long．句子里which引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞a busy street．
我的職責(zé)是打掃一條400米長的繁華街道．
2．Cleaning the street seems easy，but sometimes it is very dangerous as you have to be careful of passing cars and bikes．句子里Cleaning the street 是動名詞做主語；as引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示"因為"．
打掃街道看起來很容易，但是有時候很危險，因為你必須時刻當(dāng)心經(jīng)過的車輛．

解答 Dear Jack：
 I'm writing to share with you my experience at the weekend．（點明書信目的）I took part in a volunteer activity．My duty was to clean a busy street which is about four hundred meters long．【高分句型一】After I got up at seven o'clock，sleepy，I went out without a second thought．Cleaning the street seems easy，but sometimes it is very dangerous as you have to be careful of passing cars and bikes．【高分句型二】I threw myself onto the bed as soon as I got back home in the afternoon．（記敘活動過程）It was not until then that I realized how great street cleaners are．So I hope everyone should keep our surroudings clean so as to reduce cleaners abandon．All drivers must have an eye on cleaners cleaning the street especially at dawn．（自己的收獲）
What about your weekend？Please tell me in your next email．
Regards，Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱作文就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊，以條目的形式列出，請考生據(jù)此進(jìn)行寫作．這實際上是對考生思路和文章寫作范圍所作的明確限定．因此，提綱中所列舉的要點要全部涉及到，一個也不能遺漏．