假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同
桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Recently, some college students are busy finding variety of methods to make money during their free time. Some people believed that it is great. In such a competitive society, experience is becoming very more and more important. Doing part-time jobs are a good way to get experience. And it also helps to reducing parents’ financial stress. Others, therefore, argue that students’ duty is nothing but study. On the one hand, part-time jobs may have a negative effect in their studies. On the other hand, students may do something wrong because they are so young to tell good from bad. In my opinion, as soon as they arrange their time reasonably, we are sure to get good grades and work experience.


【小題1】finding ∧ a
【小題2】believed 改成believe
【小題3】去掉very
【小題4】are 改成is
【小題5】 reducing改成reduce           
【小題6】therefore改成however
【小題7】in 改成on
【小題8】so改成too
【小題9】soon改成long
【小題10】we改成they

解析試題分析：文章介紹大學(xué)生利用空余時(shí)間做兼職的事情，有人贊成，有人反對，作者認(rèn)為只要他們合理安排時(shí)間，一定會取得好成績和工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
【小題1】現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生在找各種各樣的辦法在空余的時(shí)間掙錢。A variety of各種各樣的，
【小題2】有人認(rèn)為這很好，這是一般情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：believed 改成believe
【小題3】經(jīng)驗(yàn)變得越來越重要。More and more important去掉very
【小題4】做兼職工作是很好的獲得經(jīng)驗(yàn)的方式，主語是動名詞，謂語是單數(shù):are 改成is
【小題5】這可以減少父母的經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力。Help to do sth幫助做…. reducing改成reduce           
【小題6】然而，有的人認(rèn)為學(xué)生的職責(zé)就是學(xué)習(xí)，這兩句話是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：therefore改成however
【小題7】兼職工作對他們的學(xué)習(xí)有負(fù)面的影響。Have  effect on“對…有影響”，in 改成on
【小題8】年輕人太年輕了，不能區(qū)分好與壞。這是too …to…結(jié)構(gòu)：so改成too
【小題9】只要他們合理安排時(shí)間，他們一定會取得好成績和工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)。As soon as“一…就…”，as long as只要，
【小題10】主語不一致：前面是they后面也是they，而且這篇文章是第三人稱。
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