Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞；

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉；

修改：在錯(cuò)詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Recently, people were moved by a story taking the place in Thailand. It told about a girl whom had a quarrel with her mother and ran away from home. After several days, the girl walked into a restaurant in hungers. A man who was the cook invites her to sit down and then made some delicious food for him. The girl was very surprising. Then the cook told the girl that a woman took a photo and asked him whether he seen the girl. But the woman gave him some money to cook for the girl if she turned up. Until then the girl realized how greatly her mother was and she should be grateful on her.

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, people were moved by a story taking place in Thailand. It told about a girl had a quarrel with her mother and ran away from home. After several days, the girl walked into a restaurant in . A man who was the cook her to sit down and then made some delicious food for . The girl was very . Then the cook said that a woman took a photo and asked him whether he seen the girl. the woman gave him some money to cook for the girl if she turned up. Until then the girl realized how her mother was and she should be grateful her.

【解析】

第一處：句意：最近，人們被發(fā)生于泰國(guó)的一個(gè)事件所感動(dòng)了。a story后面跟現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)。take place是固定搭配，指“發(fā)生”的意思。故去掉taking后面的the。

第二處：此處運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是a girl，引導(dǎo)詞在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ)。故whom改為who。

第三處：in hunger是固定搭配，是“饑餓”的意思，在此作狀語(yǔ)，修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞walked。故hungers改為hunger。

第四處：文章講述過(guò)去的事情，所以用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。故invites改為invited。

第五處：此處指的是“為那個(gè)女孩做了好吃的”。故him改為her。

第六處：句意：那個(gè)女孩感到很驚訝。指人的內(nèi)心感覺，應(yīng)該用-ed結(jié)尾的形容詞。故surprising改為surprised。

第七處：whether引導(dǎo)的從句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞發(fā)生于took和asked之前，所以用過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)。故seen前加had。

第八處：前后兩句是句意的順承，而非轉(zhuǎn)折。故But改為And。

第九處：句意：直到那時(shí)，女孩才意識(shí)到她的母親是多么偉大，她應(yīng)該感激她。her mother was后面跟形容詞作表語(yǔ)。故greatly改為great。

第十處：be grateful to sb.是固定搭配，指“感激某人”。故on改為to。