Question

【題目】看圖寫(xiě)作：假設(shè)你是XX中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華，下面四幅圖描述了上周日你放學(xué)回家的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，將這件事以日記形式記述下來(lái)，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的感受。

注意：

1．日記的開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好。

2．詞數(shù)120字左右。

提示詞：煙斗 pipe 桶 bucket

April 5th, 2015 Sunday Cloudy __________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

There was an old house on my way from school to home. Last Sunday, I happened to see some smoke coming out of its window when I passed by. There was no doubt that the house was on fire. I was so worried that I took immediate actions to solve the problem. I found a bucket far away from the house and carried some water with it. Luckily, the fire did not grow bigger. So I put out the fire with the water at once.

To my great surprise, an old man, who seemed to get wet because of the water, appeared behind the window. He shouted at me angrily with a wet pipe in his hand. At that moment, it suddenly occurred to me that the smoke was from his pipe. As soon as I realized what had happened, I ran away from the old house immediately.

【解析】

試題分析：考查看圖作文。寫(xiě)好看圖作文需要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1、認(rèn)真觀察，理解圖畫(huà)；2、要發(fā)揮聯(lián)想和想象力。在此基礎(chǔ)上，確定文章的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將文章完整地表述出來(lái)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)言和恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞與過(guò)渡詞。這篇文章要求以日記的形式展開(kāi)，故注意時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文使用了多種句型，使結(jié)構(gòu)更加合理，表達(dá)更加到位。如定語(yǔ)從句：To my great surprise, an old man, who seemed to get wet because of the water, appeared behind the window.，再如名詞性從句：As soon as I realized what had happened, I ran away from the old house immediately.。除此之外，還使用了許多的短語(yǔ)，如：happen to do、pass by、take immediate action to、put out the fire等。