Question

【題目】【2015·江蘇】

書(shū)面表達(dá) (滿分 25 分)

請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖表,并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇 150 詞左右的文章.

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

1. 用約 30 個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容;

2. 結(jié)合上述信息,簡(jiǎn)要分析導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的主要原因;

3. 根據(jù)你的分析,從社會(huì)規(guī)范(rules and regulations)和個(gè)人行為兩方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹?不少于兩點(diǎn))。

[寫(xiě)作要求]

1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句;

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

3. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,語(yǔ)篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】

The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.

Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)

【解析】

試題分析：今年江蘇高考英語(yǔ)采用了“材料類+圖形+提綱類”形式，綜合考查考生閱讀材料，識(shí)圖和寫(xiě)作能力，較往年有所創(chuàng)新，也增加了難度。材料分為三部分：第一部分講述了一位老奶奶阻止車輛停放引發(fā)的爭(zhēng)議。第二部分講述了行人和自行車不遵守紅綠燈，導(dǎo)致交通事故發(fā)生的現(xiàn)象。第三部分是圖表和文字，

反映近幾年車輛的數(shù)量激增現(xiàn)象。要求第一段用30個(gè)單詞概括材料內(nèi)容；第二段分析導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的原因；第三段從社會(huì)規(guī)則和個(gè)人行為談?wù)剢⑹荆ú簧儆趦牲c(diǎn)）。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文嚴(yán)格按照“三步走”的格局，第一段用短短26字（不含標(biāo)點(diǎn)）概括了所給材料，得益于使用了“not only…but also…”這一經(jīng)典句型；第二段分析了導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的原因，使用了“give rise to, large-scale construction of, the increasing number of, (be) vital to”等高級(jí)詞匯，同時(shí)“what’s worse”銜接詞的恰當(dāng)使用使該段條理清晰。第三段句型多樣，變換使用了“Without虛擬語(yǔ)氣，it is…who…強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，it is one’s duty to do sth.”等句型，為文章增色不少。