Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)（每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(/)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

It is common for students to find part-time job. Last summer holiday, I had once worked as a waiter at a restaurant. At first I couldn’t stand the hard work… But with time goes by, I came to realize that I did the meaningful thing. First, I made some money, what allowed me to buy birthday gifts for my friends with asking my parents for money. But I began to learn about the value of money. Besides, I also learned how to get along with other. In a word, the part-time job at the restaurants was great and I got some valuably work experience from it.

Answer 1

【答案】

It is common for students to find part-time job. Last summer holiday, I once worked as a waiter at a restaurant. At first I couldn’t stand the hard work… But with time by, I came to realize that I did meaningful thing. First, I made some money, allowed me to buy birthday gifts for my friends asking my parents for money. I began to learn about the value of money. Besides, I also learned how to get along with . In a word, the part-time job at the was great and I got some work experience from it.

【解析】

第一處：find后加 a 由于job是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)句意，它在文章中首次出現(xiàn)，且此處表示泛指，故要用一個(gè)不定冠詞a。

第二處：once前的had去掉 分析句子，可知本句中有時(shí)間狀語once，故本句應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)。

第三處：goes→going 分析句子，可知此處是with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語，此處用go的現(xiàn)在分詞形式作賓補(bǔ)。

第四處：the→a 根據(jù)文意可知此處表示泛指，故用不定冠詞a。

第五處：what→which 分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，從句中缺少主語，根據(jù)句意可知先行詞是前面整個(gè)句子的內(nèi)容，故用關(guān)系代詞which。

第六處：with→without 根據(jù)對(duì)上下文的理解可知本句的意思是這樣可以讓我不用問父母要錢而買禮物給朋友。故用without。

第七處：But→And 分析句子，根據(jù)句意可知此處要用一個(gè)表順承的連詞And。

第八處：other→成others others的意思是＂別人，其他人＂，other一般用在名詞的前面，意思是＂別的＂。根據(jù)句意，故用others。

第九處：restaurants→restaurant 根據(jù)句子可知作者只在一家餐廳做兼職，故restaurant用單數(shù)形式。

第十處：valuably→valuable 分析句子可知valuably后的work是一個(gè)名詞，故要用形容詞修飾該名詞，故valuably改成valuable。