Question

【題目】（十八）

根據(jù)圖畫(huà)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生活帶來(lái)的影響。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：不少于120字

2．生詞：通訊：communicate(with sb．)vi. communication （n．） 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)：the Internet

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.

In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.

With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇看圖寫文章,屬開(kāi)放式作文。根據(jù)圖畫(huà)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生活帶來(lái)的影響。首先要理解圖畫(huà)的含義，然后用流暢的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)出來(lái)。可根據(jù)圖畫(huà)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、句式，避免都寫成簡(jiǎn)單句，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色。注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120字，不要太多或太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.

在文章第一句就運(yùn)用了一個(gè)現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)的句子，且take place 無(wú)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. 此句包含了一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient.這是一個(gè)并列句，and將兩個(gè)現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)連在一起。It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents.這個(gè)句子包含了一個(gè)even if引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.本句運(yùn)用了形容詞比較級(jí)。另外文中還運(yùn)用了下面的高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)：kept in touch with；communicate with；

What’s more；quicken；hear from；In a word。