Question

【題目】Correction 2(2017屆河北唐山一中高三調(diào)研)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 (∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 (\) 劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Which is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. In it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible. We are often send e-mails to our classmates. We can make telephone call to our families as well as our friends. However, we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach myself English. We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games on the net. We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.

Answer 1

【答案】

is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get much information as possible. We often send e-mails to our classmates. We can make telephone to our families as well as our friends. , we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach English. We can also enjoy music, sports and play computer games on the net. We do shopping even without leaving our homes.

【解析】

第一處：as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，指代后面主句內(nèi)容，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句的時候，不能放在句首。故Which改為As。

第二處：play a/an…part in意為＂起著……的作用＂，more是輔音音素開頭的單詞，用a。故playing后加a。

第三處：it指the Internet，on the Internet是在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上。故In改為On。

第四處：as much information as possible意為＂盡可能多的信息＂，so…as用于否定句。故so改為as。

第五處：we和send是主動關(guān)系，不需要被動。故去掉are。

第六處：telephone call是可數(shù)名詞，這里沒有不定冠詞，應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)。故call改為calls。

第七處：這里是進(jìn)一步說明網(wǎng)絡(luò)的好處，用Besides或Moreover表示遞進(jìn)。故However改為Besides或Moreover。

第八處：teach oneself是＂自學(xué)＂，主語是we，反身代詞是ourselves。故myself改為ourselves。

第九處：和enjoy music，play computer games并列用動詞原形。故watching改為watch。

第十處：這篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。故could改為can。