Question

根據(jù)下面表格信息寫一篇短文，介紹該校學(xué)生參加各種活動(dòng)的情況。首句已給出。

Activity	Every Day	Once or Twice a week	Three or Four Times a week
Watch TV	85%	2%	13%
Use the Internet	0%	44%	56%
Read English Books	90%	10%	0%
Exercise	15%	10%	75%

 

Answer 1

 
Here are the results of the student activity at No. 1 Middle School. According to the survey, most students watch TV everyday. Some students watch TV three or four times a week. And only 2% students watch TV once or twice a week. All students use the internet. Some use it once or twice a week, but more students use it three or four times a week. They think from the internet they can learn much useful information. As for reading English books, 90% students read English book everyday, and the left 10% students read them once or twice a week. Exercise is important for students. Most students exercise three or four times a week. And about 10% students exercise once or twice a week. About 15% students do sports everyday.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖表作文。表格中包含了4項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，以及各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)調(diào)查結(jié)果。寫作時(shí)要理清要點(diǎn)，不要出現(xiàn)遺漏。并將各要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容用正確的語言表述出來。在陳述時(shí)可適當(dāng)使用不同的詞語，使文章更生動(dòng)。也可加入一些總結(jié)性的，承接性的句子和短語，讓文章更流暢和富有邏輯。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章緊扣材料，要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清晰流暢。文中用到了一些不錯(cuò)的短語和表達(dá)方式，如：According to the survey,根據(jù)調(diào)查；Some use it once or twice a week, but more students use it three or four times a week.一些同學(xué)一周使用一兩次，但更多的同學(xué)一周兩三次。But使兩個(gè)句子形成了對(duì)比，而且用到了比較級(jí)。Exercise is important for students.運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)學(xué)生很重要。這是個(gè)承接句子，引出了下文。