Question

兩個(gè)多月后就要中考了，作為初三的學(xué)生，我們正在努力學(xué)習(xí)為中考作準(zhǔn)備。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。
要點(diǎn)：（1）作業(yè)多，壓力大。（2）不抱怨，不放棄任何一門(mén)學(xué)科。（3）睡眠不足，充分利用時(shí)間。（4）鍛煉少，身體差。（5）每天鍛煉半小時(shí)，吃健康的食物。
要求：（1）內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；
（2）不得透露考生姓名、學(xué)校等信息。
    The Senior School Entrance Examination is coming, we are studying hard to prepare for it.              
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                      

Answer 1

We have too much homework to do every day, so we are stressed out. （2分） But we shouldn’t  complain ,and we shouldn’t give up any subject . （2分）Because we don’t have enough sleep, we should learn to make full use of time and don’t stay up too late. （2分）Some of us are in poor health because we have no time to do sports. （2分）I think we should exercise for half an hour every day and eat healthy food. （2分）

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文，文章總體應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是給出提示要點(diǎn)的作文， 所給提示的內(nèi)容一定要寫(xiě)全面，按照提示詞的思路進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，應(yīng)適當(dāng)使用連詞，使文章過(guò)渡自然。最后檢查作文時(shí)，還要注意單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、字母大小寫(xiě)等細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文章多次使用了主從復(fù)合句，為文章增色不少。