Question

7．畢業(yè)季即將來(lái)臨，你校正在舉辦畢業(yè)生英語(yǔ)征文比賽．假如你是唐祎，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，回顧你的學(xué)習(xí)、生活經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)剬?duì)未來(lái)的打算．

注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包括圖中所有信息，可展開(kāi)思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息；
3．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
My name is Tangyi．I went to primary school in 2007．I had many hobbies and joined different interest groups in the school．In 2011，I invited many friends to my 10th birthday party．We had a very good time．
In 2013，I entered middle school．I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite．Except for study，I took part in many school activities．I remembered an unforgettable school trip to Xuanwu Lake Park．We had a picnic and played games there，singing and chatting．Besides，I am a member of the Sports Club．I think doing sports can make me healthier．
I hope I can go to my dream school for further study after my graduation．I want to be a doctor in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite我學(xué)了很多學(xué)科花了很多時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)因?yàn)槭俏易钕矚g的．
because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
I think doing sports can make me healthier我認(rèn)為做運(yùn)動(dòng)能讓我更健康．
think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My name is Tangyi．I went to primary school in 2007．I had many hobbies and joined different interest groups in the school．In 2011，I invited many friends to my 10th birthday party．We had a very good time．
In 2013，I entered middle school．I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite【高分句型一】．Except for study，I took part in many school activities．I remembered an unforgettable school trip to Xuanwu Lake Park．We had a picnic and played games there，singing and chatting．Besides，I am a member of the Sports Club．I think doing sports can make me healthier．【高分句型二】（學(xué)習(xí)、生活經(jīng)歷）
I hope I can go to my dream school for further study after my graduation．I want to be a doctor in the future．（未來(lái)的打算．）

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