Question

愉快的寒假就要到了，同學(xué)們有一些什么計(jì)劃呢？假如你是李平，你給自己擬定了一個(gè)寒假計(jì)劃，并寫(xiě)信告訴你的好朋友Nancy，請(qǐng)按照要求寫(xiě)完這封信。

和朋友一起	每周一、三參加俱樂(lè)部，學(xué)習(xí)繪畫(huà)； 每周二、四練習(xí)打籃球，鍛煉身體； 周末去購(gòu)物中心，……（至少一點(diǎn)）
和家人一起	每天健康飲食；花少于1小時(shí)看電視；幫父母做家務(wù)； ……（至少一點(diǎn)）

要求：1．語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)齊全，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)拓展。

2. 70個(gè)詞左右。

Dear Nancy,

I am so excited to tell you about my plan to the winter holiday.

 

 

 

 

Best wishes．

Yours

Li Ping

 

Answer 1

Dear Nancy,

I am so excited to tell you about my plan to the winter holiday. Every Monday and Wednesday , Iwant to join an club to study painting. Every Tuesday and Thursday ,I plan to practice playing basketball to keep fit. I also make a plan to go shopping on weekends.

When I stay at home with my family, I would like to eat healthy food every day. I want to spend less than an hour watching TV each day. I also can help my parents with the housework.

That is my vacation plan. What about you ? Can you tell me your plan?

Best wishes．

Yours

Li Ping

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，作文題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了要求。寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，每一條都要寫(xiě)到，注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章主要寫(xiě)我寒假的計(jì)劃，要點(diǎn)全部都寫(xiě)出，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求。文中使用很多短語(yǔ)，讓文章更加出彩，如join an club，plan to，practice playing basketball, keep fit，are easy to，spend less than an hour watching TV等。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點(diǎn)滴積累，這樣在寫(xiě)作文時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。