Question

在陽光雨露里，我已長高、長壯，但這還不是全部，長大還應包括什么？是關心、幫助同學？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報親朋師長？還是……，成長的點點滴滴，久久不能忘記。請以I Am Not a Child Any More為題，記敘你在學習生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已經(jīng)不再是一個下孩子。
要求：1.請根據(jù)所給題目，用英語寫一篇短文，不少于80詞；
2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；
3.文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計算    
I am not a child any more

Answer 1

I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.    
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”     
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本篇短文涉及了過去和現(xiàn)在的改變，從各個方面能感受到作者不再是一個孩子了，已經(jīng)長大了可以為父母做點事情了。文中用到了一般過去式。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，不僅介紹了作者自己和小時候的變化，還從實際行動中表明自己不再是一個孩子了，文中用到了一些固定句型The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others；It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.這些句子給文章增色不少。