Question

三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，三年中給你留下最深印象的是哪位老師？為什么？請結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，以“The teacher l will never forget”為題，寫一篇短文。

    內(nèi)容包括：1．簡要介紹老師的性格或特長.2．至少列舉一個事例，說明老師是如何在學(xué)習(xí)或生活上幫助你，給你留下深刻印象的,3.感謝老師，祝福老師。

    作文要求：1. 80字左右。2．必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校，老師的姓名請一律使用Mr Li或Ms Li。

The teacher I will never forget

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Answer 1

【答案】

  The teacher I will never forget

How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had many good memories of my classmates and teachers.

The teacher I will never forget is Mr Li, an English teacher. He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr Li noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.

I want to say thanks to Mr Li, and I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!

【解析】符合題目要求，內(nèi)容完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達(dá)清楚