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根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息,寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段.

注意:1.字?jǐn)?shù)60~80.

2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上.(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)

3.發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出.

假如你是張斌,今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動.請你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿.

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen year old, live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends,

I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. ________________________________

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  學(xué)生:習(xí)作:

  Dear friends,

  I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin. I'm fifteen years old. I live in Beijing. One of my favourite subjects are(X1) biology. I'm interesting(X2) in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy singing(X3) of birds in nature. I want to be a biologist when I will grow up.

  I feel luck(X4) to join you. I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make our earth more beautiful and much greener.

  That's all. Thank you for listening.

  剖析:“one of…”之一,其后所跟的名詞或代詞用復(fù)數(shù),但謂語動詞必須用單數(shù).所以此處的are要改為is

  例如:One of them is lost.他們中的一個人迷路了.

  2be interested in是固定短語,意為“對……感興趣”,而interesting則表示事物本身有趣的,令人產(chǎn)生興趣的,例如:

  I am not interested in what he says.對他所說的話我不感興趣.

  The story is very interesting.這個故事很有趣.

  I will give you some interesting storybooks.我將給你幾本有趣的故事書.

  故文中的interesting要改為interested

  3enjoy后跟doing表示“喜歡,樂于做某事”,而這里是特指自然界中鳥的聲音,因此文中的singing是動名詞,前應(yīng)加the

  4feel“覺得”是系動詞,后應(yīng)跟形容詞做表語,所以名詞luck應(yīng)改為形容詞lucky

  總評:本文作者能圍繞主題來介紹自己,層層深入、語言流暢、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、形象生動、具體、個別用詞欠妥,還需不斷加強(qiáng).


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根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景和英文提示詞語,寫出語法正確,意思連貫,符合邏輯的英文文段.

所給的英文提示詞語必須都用上,中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐字翻譯.(字?jǐn)?shù)60~80)提示:假如你是李雷,現(xiàn)在你給你的英國朋友Jim寫一封信,告訴他你和同學(xué)們上周日去香山公園郊游的活動的感受.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出.

你們早上七點(diǎn)鐘在學(xué)校門口集合,大約八點(diǎn)鐘到達(dá)香山公園……

meet, arrive, at the foot of the hill, have a party, play games, climb, on the top of, see, how, beautiful, feel proud(自豪的), live Beijing, the 2008 Olympic Games, hold

  Dear Jim,

  Last Sunday my classmates and I want to Xiangshan Park, I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Lei

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