Question

請(qǐng)以"My last holiday"為題，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：

1. Where did you go?

2. When did you go?

3. How did you get there?

4. How long did you spend there?

5. What did you do or see?

6. What was it like?

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

 On my last holiday went to Hawaii.My classmates LiZhi wei,QinChangping and I.First day,went to the beach took a bus.The QinChangping pulled out to a stong American and he won.The LZhiwei played  volleyball with two beautiful American girl but he lost.I swam with six sporsmans.My sawm was the best.

Next day.We saw a film in a big cinema.We had lunch in a big hotel and ate lots of shashliks.There shashilks were very nice.Afternoon ,we went to graeyard of  ZhangXue liang ,and took lots of photos.

 Third day.We stayed 5 hours in the beach.We played bolleyball with seven beautiful American girls.there  were only us there boys ,so we won to the girls.Afternoon ,we bought many books of ZhangXueliang in there.The books were very nice.I am  going to send  my friends.

  Next we took a plane to Beijing .I love Hawaii.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的最后一個(gè)假期。本題所給材料比較簡(jiǎn)單，動(dòng)詞前先要閱讀所給六個(gè)問(wèn)題,對(duì)涉及問(wèn)題都要有所回應(yīng)。在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性,注意應(yīng)用所給單詞，短語(yǔ)。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。