假設(shè)父親節(jié)即將來(lái)臨，請(qǐng)你借此機(jī)會(huì)給你父親寫封信，和他談?wù)勑睦镌挕?/span>

要點(diǎn)： 1.父親辛勤工作，讓我受到更好的教育，過(guò)上好的生活。

2.父親對(duì)我學(xué)習(xí)嚴(yán)格要求，但在我考試失利時(shí)，又經(jīng)常鼓勵(lì)我不要放棄。

3.表達(dá)對(duì)父親的感謝和祝福。

要求：短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所含提示要點(diǎn)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)言流暢。

短文字?jǐn)?shù)90字左右，短文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)人名、校名、地址等。

Dear father,

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Dear father,

Father’s Day is coming. I want to say thank you on this special day.

You are the man that I admire most in this world but I don’t know how to express my thanks most of the time.

I want to thank you for working so hard. Because of your great effort, our family lead a happy life and I receive better education. I understand that you are strict with me in my study because you want me to be better than before. I appreciate your kind encouragement when I failed in my exams.

I wish you could always be healthy and happy. I will try my best to be a man that you have always wished.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，所給提綱要點(diǎn)清晰，要求明確，話題內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活實(shí)際。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，使文章自然流暢。同時(shí)，使用了一些的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，這為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

 

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