Question

假如你是林平，你的筆友Sally正在美國(guó)的一所學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，她給你發(fā)了一個(gè)電子郵件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)其內(nèi)容，給予回復(fù)。郵件的開頭及結(jié)尾均已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。

2. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)意連貫，句式規(guī)范。

參考詞匯： listening ability（能力）, spoken Chinese, radio, TV programs, video tapes

From:  Sally

To:    Lin Ping

Subject: Asking for help

Dear Lin Ping,

How are you getting on? Thanks for telling me something about your school life. I’m glad you’re doing well in your English study.

As you know, I began to learn Chinese 2 years ago. Now let me tell you something about my Chinese study. Though I can read and write a little Chinese, I’m still weak in listening and my spoken Chinese isn’t improving. I find it hard to talk with the people around in Chinese. Could you give me some advice? How I wish I could talk to you in Chinese one day!

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Sally

From: Lin Ping

To:   Sally

Subject: Re: Asking for help

Dear Sally,

Glad to hear from you. You say you have some problems in learning Chinese. Don’t worry. __________________________________________________________

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I hope you will make great progress in your Chinese study. Good luck!

Yours,

Lin Ping

 

Answer 1

【答案】

From: Lin Ping

To:   Sally

Subject: Re: Asking for help

Dear Sally,

Glad to hear from you. You say you have some problems in learning Chinese. Don’t worry. Let me give you some advice.

If you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs, video tapes or films. I think they are helpful. As for your spoken Chinese, I think it’s good to read aloud in the morning. When you meet a Chinese, you may go up and try to have a talk with him if possible. I’m sure the more you practise listening and speaking, the better you’ll do in them.

I hope you will make great progress in your Chinese study. Good luck!

Yours,

Lin Ping

【解析】

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。本題材料主要是一封來(lái)信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信。在回信中對(duì)涉及的問題都要有所回應(yīng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。

考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。