Question

目前中學(xué)生早餐問(wèn)題已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)關(guān)注，你所在學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)在5月20日“全國(guó)學(xué)生營(yíng)養(yǎng)日”開(kāi)展問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，其結(jié)果令人擔(dān)憂(yōu)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)營(yíng)養(yǎng)早餐。(regularly, active, junk food(垃圾食品), a balanced diet, as a result)

學(xué)生比例	早餐情況	健康狀況
55%	有規(guī)律地吃早餐	身體健康，精力充沛
25%	吃垃圾食品	營(yíng)養(yǎng)不均衡
20%	沒(méi)有吃早餐	感到饑餓，上課無(wú)法認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，容易生病

Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its important. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students  ________________________
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Answer 1

Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of them just have junk food intstead. They don’t have balanced diet. It is had for their health.20 percent (of the students) go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully. What’s more, they get ill easily.

It’s necessary /important  for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.
試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要寫(xiě)早餐的重要性，通過(guò)三組數(shù)據(jù)分別對(duì)規(guī)律吃早餐、吃垃圾食物和不吃早餐上學(xué)的情況對(duì)比，得出早餐的重要性，全文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如keep healthy, look active.balanced diet,55 percent of,25 percent of,20 percent,As a result,in class,listen to,What’s more; 固定句型如It is had for their health，It’s necessary /important  for us to have breakfast .文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。