Question

人類只有一個(gè)地球，這是我們賴以生存的地方，所有保護(hù)地球是我們義不容辭的責(zé)任，那么我們應(yīng)該怎樣從身邊的小事做起，來(lái)保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，拯救地球呢？
（1）提示短語(yǔ)： keep …… clean/tidy  throw away rubbish  spit（吐痰） turn off the lights
（2）80詞左右（共15分）
What  shall we do to protect the world

Answer 1

What shall we do to protect the world
The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Then what should we do to protect our environment?
Firstly, we are supposed to keep our environment clean. In our daily life, we cannot throw away the life rubbish. Never should we spit everywhere because it will pollute the environment and does harm to our health.
Secondly, we’d better save energy. Don’t forget to turn off the lights before we leave the room. If possible, we can walk or ride a bike to school and advertise our parents to use motorcars less.
Last but not least, we can try our best to educate more people to protect our earth. We can live a low-carbon life. Let’s act together to take care of our world. Only in this way can we make our life better and better.

試題分析：這是一篇開放性作文。本文所給材料較籠統(tǒng)，我們要用準(zhǔn)確、地道的語(yǔ)言把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。在動(dòng)筆之前，要結(jié)合現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中的現(xiàn)實(shí)情況，提出恰當(dāng)合理的建議。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，要體現(xiàn)出向世人呼吁保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性，要大家一起努力。寫作中要求恰當(dāng)使用連詞、過(guò)渡詞和銜接句型，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，有條理性，敘述符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)以及高級(jí)句式，為文章增色不少.如:we have the duty to take care of it.我們有責(zé)任照顧好我們的家園we are supposed to keep our environment clean.我們應(yīng)該保持環(huán)境的清潔倒裝句式的使用顯示了較高的語(yǔ)言功底，如Never should we spit everywhere我們永遠(yuǎn)不能隨地吐痰Only in this way can we make our life better and better. 只有通過(guò)這些方式我們才能使我們的生活變得越來(lái)越好等表述準(zhǔn)確，本文中連詞的使用恰當(dāng)，句子銜接緊密、連貫，如 Firstly, Secondly,  Last but not least,語(yǔ)氣婉轉(zhuǎn)誠(chéng)懇，很有說(shuō)服力。