Question

假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于(be crazy about…)玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔(dān)心。請根據(jù)下表提示給Jim 寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�及建議。

Jim 過去	功課好，積極參加學(xué)校的各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。
Jim 現(xiàn)在	對學(xué)習(xí)沒興趣，上課不專心，不按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可能使你放松，但……
你的建議	(至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn))

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。2. 要點(diǎn)完整，層次清楚，語法正確。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                 
                                                                                
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.
You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can't hand in your homework on time. Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may be bad for your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and hands.
I hope you should concentrate more on your schoolwork. Why not take part in some after-school activities when you feel bored? Why not spend more free time chatting with your friends?
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。