Question

假如你是Mike，你的朋友Susan近來心情不好，請你給她發(fā)一封E-mail，提出合理性的建議，幫助她調(diào)適心情。
字?jǐn)?shù)：80—100字（首尾句已給出，不記入所要求的總字?jǐn)?shù)）。
供你參考的建議有：
sing, take a walk, do sports, write the diary, watch TV, listen to music, go shopping, go swimming, go outside…
Dear Susan,
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Yours
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Susan,
When you are not feeling well, the following suggestions may be suitable for you:
1. Go outside! Do something active. For example, take a walk, go swimming, or just lie on the grass and watch clouds pass.
2. Do something you’re good at! If you love to sing, then go to turn on some music and sing loudly!
3. Start a diary. Write down your thoughts, dreams, problems or anything you want!
In all, if you want to feel well about yourself, you must believe in yourself！
Best wishes!
Yours  
Mike

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