Question

假設(shè)你叫李俊，你的美國(guó)朋友David想要在中國(guó)結(jié)交更多的朋友。你通過(guò)電子郵件，把你的最好的朋友王明介紹給他。王明情況見(jiàn)下表：

姓名	王明
年齡	15
外貌	方臉，大眼睛，短發(fā)，高個(gè)子；
個(gè)性	誠(chéng)實(shí)，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，從不說(shuō)他人壞話；
愛(ài)好	癡迷于DIY, 上周給我做了一張生日卡片；
其他情況	對(duì)了解不同種類(lèi)的鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)感興趣，是觀鳥(niǎo)協(xié)會(huì)的一員； 最喜歡冬季，因?yàn)樗�喜歡堆雪人，打雪仗；
理想	嗓音好，喜歡唱歌，長(zhǎng)大后想成為一名歌手；

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下連貫；

2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

 

 

 

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

 

Answer 1

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

He is 15 years old. He is tall with two big eyes. He is tall and has short hair.

Wang Ming has a good sense of humor. He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy. He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends. He never says a bad word about others.

He is crazy about DIY. It was my birthday last week. He made a birthday card for me. He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society. Among/Of the four seasons, he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends.

He has a good voice and is good at singing. So he wants to be a singer when he grows up.

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，作文題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了要求。寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，每一條都要寫(xiě)到，注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章主要寫(xiě)介紹王明，要點(diǎn)全部都寫(xiě)出，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求。文中使用很多短語(yǔ)，讓文章更加出彩，如with two big eyes.，keep secrets，says a bad word about others , is interested in，taking trains”等。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點(diǎn)滴積累，這樣在寫(xiě)作文時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。