Question

上周，我們舉辦了一次“我們城市的一些好場(chǎng)所” 問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的表格所提供的信息寫(xiě)一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，字?jǐn)?shù)為60-80詞。

Place	Name	Reason
Supermarket	Sanjiang Supermarket	fresh vegetables, cheap, many kinds, good quality
Movie theater	Times Cinema	big screen, good sound, comfortable seats, new movies
Radio station	93.5 FM	much news, popular music, educational stories
Hospital	People’s Hospital	good equipment, friendly service, good doctors

Last week we did a survey about good places in our city. Here are the results.
                                                                 
                                                                      
                                                                    
                                                                   
                                                                    
                                                  

Answer 1

A survey of good places in our city
Last week we did a survey about good places in our city. Here are the results.The best supermarket in our city is Sanjiang Supermarket. It has fresh vegetables and many kinds of goods, the prices are cheap and the quality is good. Times Cinema is the best. It has the biggest screens, good sound, comfortable seats and new movies. As for radio station, most young people think 93.5 FM is the best radio station. It has much news, popular music and educational stories. People's Hospital is the best of all. It has good equipment and doctors and the friendliest service.

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所給的題目結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作中要包含被調(diào)查的幾個(gè)方面將超市、影院、廣播站和醫(yī)院等四個(gè)方面進(jìn)行陳述，表達(dá)出人們的觀(guān)點(diǎn)等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)主要是第三人稱(chēng)，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文雖然簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了自己的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，包含形容詞最高級(jí)的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如Times Cinema is the best.時(shí)代影院是最好的，As for radio station關(guān)于廣播站，People's Hospital is the best of all. 人民醫(yī)院是最優(yōu)秀的一家醫(yī)院，學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。