Question

假設(shè)母親節(jié)即將來(lái)臨，請(qǐng)你借此機(jī)會(huì)給你母親寫(xiě)封信（ 不少于８０詞 ），和她談?wù)勑睦镌挕?/span>

要點(diǎn)：

１、母親辛勤工作，目的是讓我過(guò)上更好的生活，受到更好的教育

2、平時(shí)，母親把家里打理得井井有條，節(jié)假日，帶我出去玩樂(lè)

3、母親經(jīng)常與我溝通交流，在學(xué)習(xí)上對(duì)我嚴(yán)格要求，成績(jī)不理想時(shí)，鼓勵(lì)我不放棄；在生活中，遇到困難時(shí)，叫我要笑對(duì)生活

表達(dá)對(duì)母親的感謝與祝福

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Mother’s Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You often make our house clean and tidy. When we have holidays ,you often take time to go out with us .You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Mothers Day!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求在母親節(jié)來(lái)臨之時(shí)給母親寫(xiě)一份信。信的內(nèi)容包含兩個(gè)主要方面的內(nèi)容，一是，母親為我所做的一切，二是表達(dá)對(duì)母親的感激和祝愿。具體的材料已經(jīng)給出，寫(xiě)作時(shí)主要條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。

考點(diǎn)：表格作文。