Question

根據(jù)下列短語的提示以How to keep healthy?為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

do more exercise, get up early, not stay up, keep the air fresh, have healthy eating habits

How to keep healthy?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

one possible version；

How to keep healthy?

Health is important to everyone. Do you know how to keep healthy?

First, we should do more exercise. Sports can keep us fit. Second, we should have enough sleep. It’s good for us to go to bed early and get up early. Third, we should have healthy eating habits. We’d better have more vegetables, and less meat. Finally, we should keep our rooms clean and the air fresh all the time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，作文題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了要求。寫作文時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，每一條都要寫到，注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱we。寫作中適當(dāng)使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和連詞，注意要上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章主要說明如何保持身體健康，重點(diǎn)短語都已經(jīng)寫出，如do more exercise, get up early, not stay up, keep the air fresh, have healthy eating habits寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用first、second等表順序的詞，使文章的層次清楚，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求。如It’s good for…. We’d better……在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點(diǎn)滴積累，這樣在寫作文時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。