Question

6．網(wǎng)絡(luò)被廣泛地應(yīng)用于各個(gè)領(lǐng)域．人們通過(guò)網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)、交流、工作、娛樂(lè)…請(qǐng)以"The Internet"為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)小短文，分享你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)的看法，并向大家介紹你平時(shí)是怎樣使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的．
要求：1．可以拓展，短文不少于90個(gè)詞；
2．文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)或所在學(xué)校名稱．
The Internet
                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
We can also do shopping without leaving our homes   我們也可以不離開(kāi)家購(gòu)物，注意without是介詞，后面要用動(dòng)名詞．
高分句型二
But I think many students spend too much time playing Internet games．但我認(rèn)為很多學(xué)生花太多時(shí)間玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I think 是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．spend time doing sth花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事，后面跟動(dòng)詞的ing形式．

解答 We know the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life．【要點(diǎn)一，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的重要性】On the Internet，we can get as much information as we can．We can send e-mails to our friends and talk to them as well．Besides，on the Internet we can read books，enjoy music and watch ball games．We can also do shopping without leaving our homes【高分句型一，注意without的使用】．【要點(diǎn)二，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的用處】But I think many students spend too much time playing Internet games【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．We must make good use of the Internet．【要點(diǎn)三，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的看法】

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