Question

上周學(xué)校舉行了初三年級(jí)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)，家長(zhǎng)、學(xué)生和老師進(jìn)行了面對(duì)面的交流，尤芳芳代表同學(xué)們說(shuō)出了困惑，表示了決心：

因?yàn)榻?jīng)常考試，她時(shí)常有些壓力，有時(shí)感到心煩意亂；

作業(yè)多，沒有時(shí)間…；不知如何平衡學(xué)習(xí)與玩耍.

老師告訴她放松的方法有很多：⑴多與父母或朋友交流，⑵……

現(xiàn)在她知道了時(shí)間的重要性，能按時(shí)交作業(yè)，已經(jīng)取得很大的進(jìn)步；

要求：1、短文要包括列舉的要點(diǎn)并且適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

        3、詞數(shù)100詞以上，文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

   Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She __________________________      

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

    Last week our school held a parents’meeting.Parents,students and teachers sat together and talked a lot..You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems.She often suffers from stress and feels disturbed at times.becanse of exams.She has a lot of homework,so she does not have time for her hobbies.She often does not know how to keep banlance between work and play.Her teacher tells her there are many ways to relax:(1) she can often talk to her parents and friends,(2)… Now she has known the importance of saving time, she hands her homework on time and has made great progress in study.

【解析】

試題分析：首先，我們要選擇好寫本文的基準(zhǔn)時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，再在此基礎(chǔ)上做相應(yīng)的變化。其次，我們可以用淺顯易懂的，我們學(xué)過(guò)的單詞來(lái)寫這篇文章。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章中用到了一些很好的詞語(yǔ)：suffer from, because of, keep a balance, between and, communicate with, hand in, make progress。而且語(yǔ)句通順，行文流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。