Question

 五一節(jié)即將到來(lái)，班里的同學(xué)都在討論如何度過(guò)這一個(gè)節(jié)日，下面是部分同學(xué)的打算,請(qǐng)您仔細(xì)思考，列出您五一節(jié)打算做3-4件事情，并寫(xiě)一篇題為“My Plans for May Day”的短文。開(kāi)頭已給出。要求：詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)。

Name	Things to do
Lucy	visit  Grandparents
Jack	play games online
Mike	go sightseeing
I	1._____________________
I	2. __________________
I	3. __________________

 
My Plans for May Day
Time flies ! May Day holiday is coming soon.                                     
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                      
                                                                 
                                                                    
                                                                      
                                                                      

Answer 1

One possible version：
My Plans for May Day
Time flies! May Day holiday is coming soon. On May Day, first, I will visit Grandparents with my parents. Then we are going sightseeing. We will have a picnic in Taihu Park. After the picnic, we are going to a shop to buy clothes. Last, we are going to come home at half past four. In the evening, I will play games online。I will have a good time this day.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己五一節(jié)打算做3-4件事情。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I will visit……，we are going to……及I will have……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己將會(huì)玩得愉快。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了五一節(jié)將要到來(lái)，接下來(lái)介紹自己在這一天打算要做的事，最后表達(dá)自己將會(huì)玩得愉快。此處用了with my parents，going sightseeing，play games online，have a good time等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。