Question

8．每個同學(xué)在學(xué)校都有自己喜愛的學(xué)科，有的喜歡語文，有的喜歡數(shù)學(xué)，有的喜歡英語，請你根據(jù)下面的提示以"My favourite subject"為題，寫一篇短文介紹一下你最喜愛的學(xué)科．
提示詞：（1）What is your favourite subject？
（2）Why do you like it？
（3）What can you learn from it？
要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
（2）詞數(shù)：60-80．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
My favourite subject
My favourite subject isEnglish becauseit is used widely in the world..We often meet foreigners in the public places every day．With English，we can talk to them easily．My English teacher is kind and friendly，so it makes me like English better．I like reading English stories and listening to English songs．I've learn a lot about English culture．I often watch English news on TV．So I know what's happening in the world．I have a lot of fun learning English．
In a word，I love English and I will continue to learn it better．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  My favourte subject is English because it  is used widely in the world．我最喜歡的科目是英語，因為它在世界上廣泛使用．這是because引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．因為…．
高分句型二
I have a lot of fun learning English．我學(xué)英語有很多樂趣．have fun doing sth做某事有樂趣．

解答 My favourite Subject                    
    My favourte subject is English because it  is used widely in the world【要點一，最喜愛的科目是什么】【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】．We often meet foreigners in the public places every day．With English，we can talk to them easily．My English teacher is kind and friendly，so it makes me like English better．【要點二，為什么喜歡英語】
I like reading English stories and listening to English songs．I've learn a lot about English culture．I often watch English news on TV．So I know what's happening in the world．I have a lot of fun learning English【高分句型二，注意have fun doing sth的使用】..【要點三，從英語中可以學(xué)到什么】
In a word，I love English and I will continue to learn it better．

點評 動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．