Question

親愛的的同學(xué)，你將初中畢業(yè)了。在這三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定結(jié)交了許多的好朋友。請用英語寫一篇短文，介紹一位你的好朋友Li Lei。
要點(diǎn)如下： 1. 他樂于助人，性格外向，興趣廣泛；
2. 他成績優(yōu)秀，經(jīng)常在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助我；
3. 我準(zhǔn)備送他一個(gè)……以表達(dá)感謝；
4. 我對他的祝福和希望；
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80—100；開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 短文需包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)加以細(xì)節(jié)或發(fā)揮，使其連貫、通順，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息。
3. 參考詞匯：外向 outgoing
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei.

Answer 1

We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei.
He is not only helpful but also outgoing .Whoever has difficulty,he would try his best to help him. So he has a lot of friends ,and they are willing to help him,too.He is interested in many things,such as playing football,playing the piano,go hiking and so on.He has so excellent grades that he often helps me with my school work. I am ready to give him a meaningful gifts ----a photo album, in order to express my thanks . I wish that he could be better and better in the future.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者介紹自己的好朋友李雷，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如 not only...but also, try his best , a lot of ,are willing to, is interested in ,such as,and so on, helps with,am ready to ,in order to , better and better,in the future等短語，文中還用到了條件狀語從句 Whoever has difficulty; 結(jié)果狀語從句He has so excellent grades that he often helps me with my school work.；賓語從句I wish that he could be better and better in the future. 文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。