Question

7．以My_______為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文．
要求：
1．補全題目．
2．書寫整潔，語句、標(biāo)點運用、單詞拼寫正確．
3．若寫人物文中不得出現(xiàn)真名．
Myfavoritesports
As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．
Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old當(dāng)我只有五歲的時候我學(xué)會了游泳．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks雖然一開始在水里我有點緊張，但在我的父母和教練的幫助下，幾個星期之后我能游的很好．
although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．不能與but連用．

解答 My favorite sports
As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．（介紹你最喜歡的運動．）It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．【高分句型一】Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks【高分句型二】．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．（如何進行體育運動）
Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment．（運動的好處）

點評 在動筆寫作選取材料時，要注意選擇自己熟悉的內(nèi)容．在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性