Question

根據(jù)下列表格提示，以“My Favourite Shopping Mall"”為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文。要求包含表格所有內容，并適當發(fā)揮。

名稱	陽光購物中心
位置	學校附近	樓層	共4層，每層都很大
一樓	服裝店：種類多，物美價廉
二樓	書店：可以…… 禮品店：……
三樓	餐廳：來自不同國家的食物, ……
四樓	電影院：我的最愛，因為……
我的感受	是一個好玩又可以會見朋友的好地方！

                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version：
The Sunshine Shopping Mall is near my school. There are four floors and each floor is very big.
On the first floor, there are some clothes shops. There are many kinds of clothes in it. They are very cheep. Girls like them very much. There is a bookshop on the second floor, you can read books there. There is also a gift shop on it. We can buy gifts for our friends. There are many restaurant on the third floor. You can eat different kinds of food there. On the top floor, there is a cinema. We can see new films there.
The mall is an interesting place to meet friends and have fun.

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹陽光購物中心。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：there are……，we can......及The mall is......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達自己的感受。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了陽光購物中心的位置和樓層，接下來介紹各樓層所賣的商品種類，最后表達自己的感受。此處用了 on the second floor,  different kinds of ，have fun.等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。