Question

作為中學(xué)生，學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，但也需要豐富多彩的業(yè)余生活。某英文報(bào)紙正以“My Spare Time”為題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。說(shuō)說(shuō)你經(jīng)常做些什么，并請(qǐng)說(shuō)明想法或理由。
提示詞語(yǔ)：busy；colorful；sports；healthy；read；knowledge；relax；housework

Answer 1

One possible version:
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.
After school I usually play sports. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework, so they can have a good rest.
I enjoy myself in my spare time.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將自己的業(yè)余時(shí)間介紹清澈。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be busy with忙著做某事；watch TV看電視；at the sametime同時(shí)；have a rest休息等短語(yǔ)和句式。作者并且在寫作中巧妙的使用了連詞，序數(shù)詞，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理分明。所以在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.