Question

父愛(ài)是無(wú)私的，在我們的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中父親為我們付出了很多。假設(shè)你是Tony,請(qǐng)回憶一段和父親相處的往事，讓你感受到了父親的關(guān)愛(ài)和耐心……，以“Thank you, Father!”為題寫(xiě)一封感謝信，表達(dá)你的感激之情。
要求：1．短文應(yīng)包括所提供的所有內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2．詞數(shù)：90詞左右。
3．注意書(shū)信的格式。
Thank you, Father!
Dear Dad,
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Yours

Answer 1

Thank you, Father!
Dear Dad,
Today is Thanksgiving Day.Thanks for forgiving my countless mistakes. Thanks for forgiving my misunderstanding you deeply at one time. As a matter of fact, I didn’t realize that I loved you so much until the day you sent me to the new school and I saw you disappeared into the crowd. Suddenly, all memories came into my mind in a flash. How could I forget that when I got home at nearly midnight, you were still awake in order to ask me whether I need something to eat. How could I forget that when I got a high score or prizes, you would smile the whole evening. I did think myself very ungrateful! From then, I’ve been aware of the your importance in my life, my father, a diligent, considerate and brave man.
Yours
Tony

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫(xiě)自己在感恩節(jié)寫(xiě)給爸爸的信，在信中不但回憶了往事，也表達(dá)了對(duì)爸爸的感激之情。全文主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如thank for,As a matter of fact,came into my mind in a flash, in order to, From then, be aware of等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句 when I got a high score or prizes；賓語(yǔ)從句 that I loved you so much；定語(yǔ)從句you sent me to the new school and I saw you disappeared into the crowd.; 固定句型not...until; 文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。