Question

8．根據中文提示和英文書信內容，請代王濤給David寫一封回信，回答信中的問題，介紹合肥良好的公交服務，并談談你的感受．詞數在80-100字．已給的開頭和結尾不計人總詞數：

Hi!Wang Tao，     My grandpa is going to Hefei this summer vacation because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself．He says the bus service in Hefei is very good．and the people are very friendly．Is that right？Can you tell me something more about it？     I'm looking forward to learning from you soon．                                                                                 Yours，                                                                                 David

Hi!David，    I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Hefei．____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     If you have more questions，please ask me．                                                                               Yours，                                                                              Wang Tao

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I like taking a bus to school because it's comfortable and safe．我喜歡坐公共汽車去學校，因為它既舒適又安全．這是because引導的原因狀語從句，因為…．
高分句型二
If you have more questions，please ask me．如果你有更多的問題，請問我．這是if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用的是一般現在時．

解答 Hi!David，
I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Hefei．Your grandpa is right．Now great changes have taken place in Hefei and the bus service is really very good．【開頭點明主題】There are a lot of bus lines all over Hefei and buses can take you anywhere．People don't need to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap．Besides，three subway lines are being built．In the coming future，the transport in Hefei will become better．【正文部分詳細介紹合肥的交通】
I like taking a bus to school because it's comfortable and safe【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】．Also it's good for our environment．So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Hefei．【結尾部分表明自己的觀點】
If you have more questions，please ask me．【高分句型二，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】
Yours，
Wang Tao

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