Question

9．成都是"美食之鄉(xiāng)"，雖然餐館里美味很多，但我更喜歡在家吃飯．現(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)以The Advantages of Eating at Home為題，寫(xiě)一篇90-110詞的英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容須包括：
1．更干凈安全；
2．省錢(qián)；
3．再給出一條你的理由，并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明；
4．適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾．
The Advantages of Eating at Home
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：句型一：I think eating at home is better than eating outside．我認(rèn)為在家里吃東西比在外面吃得好．比較級(jí)的句子，更具有說(shuō)服力．
句型二：Home is the best word in the world．家是世界上最美的詞．借用家是最好的港灣．說(shuō)明在家吃飯是最美的事．

解答 The Advantages of Eating at Home
    Choose the place of eating is very important．It will effect our habbit and health．I think eating at home is better than eating outside．【高分句型一】When we have enough time we could cook by ourselves，surely it is more safer and cleaner than having dinners at the resterant．And usually it costs less every months．（為作者的選擇做有力的論據(jù)）    If you ask me，I must answer"Yes"Although I can eat all kinds of food in the restaurants，I prefer eating at home．I think eating at home is cleaner and safer．I can cook my favorite food by myself．It also can save money．I can share it with my parents．How wonderful it is!After all，the best place in the world is our home．We can enjoy ourselves in our homes．Home is the best word in the world．【高分句型二】（進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明在家吃飯是最好的選擇）So spend more time at home with your family，please．

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