Question

根據(jù)表格信息，幫助Alice 寫(xiě)一篇不少于70詞的自我介紹。

Name	Wang Lei
Age	13
Birthplace	Shanghai
School	Pudong No .2 Middle School
Family	grandfather , parents
She looks	slim, dark big eyes
She likes	reading English stories and listening to music
Dream	an English teacher

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Answer 1

My name is Wang Lei and I am 13 years old. I was born in Shanghai. I study at Pudong No.2 Middle School.
There are four people in my family, my grandfather, my parents, my sister and me. My sister is also a student like me. She looks slim with dark glasses. She likes reading English stories and listening to music.She wants to be an English teacher.

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章是一篇關(guān)于自己和家人情況的小作文。文中使用了there be句型，be born，want to be等對(duì)于初一的學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)是較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和詞匯，而且還應(yīng)用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式等為文章增色不少。